tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3726333078546307509.post7132953842796059999..comments2011-05-04T22:29:29.634-07:00Comments on Emerson's Bookshelf: Review of Rite Publishing's The Living Airship by Soren Keis ThustrupAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02205692065595842710noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3726333078546307509.post-34703937795394521472008-12-05T14:48:00.000-08:002008-12-05T14:48:00.000-08:00First off, thanks for the grammar catch, I don't k...First off, thanks for the grammar catch, I don't know if I was having a brain hiccup, or what, but not only did I fix that several times, but I also keep throwing in all these extra withins.<BR/><BR/>No idea why, just kept fixing it, undoing the fix, rinse and repeat.<BR/><BR/>Also, you're more than welcome for the review, it is a solid adventure, in a system that could use many more solid adventures, so thanks for creating one.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02205692065595842710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3726333078546307509.post-56146369381411441802008-12-05T13:09:00.000-08:002008-12-05T13:09:00.000-08:00First I wanted to thank you for the reviewsecond m...First I wanted to thank you for the review<BR/><BR/>second might I suggest a change (this is pure grammer). <BR/><BR/>"In addition to the personal touch, Soren also puts the adventure in a place that seems unusual, as the player character's are seeking a hijacked airship within deep within a far away mountain. "<BR/><BR/>might want to remove the "within deeep"<BR/><BR/>Again thanks.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09120212960358539072noreply@blogger.com